Talk:FCSB/GA1

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GA Review

I have looked over the article for its GA review. Here are some suggestions for improvement:

  • Per WP:LEAD, an article of this size should have a lead that is 3 or 4 full paragraphs summarizing all the main points of the article.
  • Please see MOS:BOLD for when it is appropriate to use bolding in an article.
  • Please replace as many dead links as possible. Try using archive.org for the archived versions of the websites used.
  • It needs to be made clearer where the info for the all time stats are coming from.
  • Like references need to be combined in the reference section.
  • Per WP:EL, no fansites in the external links.
  • The article is in dire need of a copyedit.

There is just too much work left to be done, so I am failing the article for now. Address these concerns and feel free to renominate. Nikki311 19:28, 6 July 2008 (UTC)[reply]