User talk:Gascon25/sandbox

For my article Stele_of_Aristion I plan on adding to underrepresented viewpoints which is the description of the atar on his shoulder and also the information given about the artist, I felt like there should have been more about the artist that created the artwork and its function as a funerary object. I will also touch on the basis of the Stelle of Aristion and how it was initially painted upon creation and why they chose the colors and patterns. Some references that i found useful are listed as follows: http://museum.classics.cam.ac.uk/collections/casts/grave-stele-aristion http://www.namuseum.gr/collections/sculpture/archaic/archaic18-en.html https://books.google.com/books?id=xmXqAAAAMAAJ&pg=PA140&lpg=PA140&dq=aristokles+sculptor&source=bl&ots=UW5YtuGkXH&sig=1tOqh4JcBh3eU0BLaOHgV7Vh3PI&hl=en&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwiu8ZueuNfWAhVG6Z8KHYhSB40Q6AEIWjAP#v=onepage&q=aristokles%20sculptor&f=false

Peer edit

You are onto a great start and I believe the key points you will be discussing later are great topics to bring into the article. I am interested to read about the color period of the artwork. But keep an eye on run on sentences and grammar. To also help you out is to keep note where when you attain your information from. So, citing your sources in your outline.