Talk:Sir Baboon McGoon
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Clarification and addition
"Based on previous boating experience, the pilot ditched, but 90 degrees different than the recommended procedure. (Following his return to service, the ditching procedures were changed to match his success method.)". Needs clarifying. What is 90 degrees different than recommended procedure. "ditching procedures were changed to match his success method". Vague.
Writer has meant to "(Consult a chart to determine official sunset on March 29, 1944, but it's likely that it would have been dark before they arrived over the English coast.)". Information pertaining to that could be added.
Noticed those two things to be tidied.
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