Talk:Merrily We Live

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Remove and rewrite

The entire article needs to be erased and rewritten from top to bottom, namely to remove original research, peacock terms, typos and just plain bad writing. Lots42 (talk) 08:39, 2 October 2008 (UTC)[reply]

Unsubstatiated claims, and claims contradicted by sources

The second paragraph of the lead contained questionable information that was unsourced, and other wording that was directly contradicted by the specified sources. I took a stab at rewording it.--Larry/Traveling_Man (talk) 02:56, 31 December 2017 (UTC)[reply]