Talk:Angela Merkel/GA1
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Reviewer: Llewee (talk · contribs) 10:59, 18 June 2023 (UTC)
- Hi Llewee! Thanks for taking on this review, and for your helpful suggestions. I've addressed all the problems you pointed out so far. Thanks again for working on this nomination with me :) Actualcpscm (talk) 11:17, 23 June 2023 (UTC)
- Hi again @Llewee, just a quick FYI that some stuff has come up and I might be a little busy in the coming days. I am by no means abandoning this nomination, and I will return to working on it within a few days at most. Actualcpscm (talk) 21:55, 28 June 2023 (UTC)
- Actualcpscm Ok that's fine. Your getting through the review a lot quicker than I tend to. :)--Llewee (talk) 22:04, 28 June 2023 (UTC)
- @Llewee Nevermind being busy, I had a surprising amount of time today. I think I'm done with the concerns and suggestions that are currently listed here, although the NPOV stuff could use a second set of eyes. Actualcpscm (talk) 20:49, 29 June 2023 (UTC)
- Actualcpscm Ok that's fine. Your getting through the review a lot quicker than I tend to. :)--Llewee (talk) 22:04, 28 June 2023 (UTC)
- Hi again @Llewee, just a quick FYI that some stuff has come up and I might be a little busy in the coming days. I am by no means abandoning this nomination, and I will return to working on it within a few days at most. Actualcpscm (talk) 21:55, 28 June 2023 (UTC)
Part one - up to (and incl.) "1998–2000: General Secretary of the CDU"
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Part oneHi Actualcpscm, I have suggested some changes to improve the first part of the article up until the end of "1998–2000: General Secretary of the CDU". Please use the Early years
Education and Scientific Career
Early Political Career
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Part two
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Part twoHi Actualcpscm, well done dealing with the points for the first section of the article, below are some points covering the next part. Obviously same rules as previously. Thanks,--Llewee (talk) 18:36, 24 June 2023 (UTC) Early sections
Early political career (part two)
Chancellor of Germany
Political positions
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Part three
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Part threeHi Actualcpscm, this should be the final round of changes to the body of the article. I will do the lead after this is done and then it will be a couple of final checks away from passing.--Llewee (talk) 22:13, 2 July 2023 (UTC)
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Part four
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Part four--Llewee (talk) 17:34, 6 August 2023 (UTC) Lead: The lead mentions health reform. This may be me missing something but I can't find any mention of this in the body of the article. Copyright:
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