Talk:Alibaba Akpobome

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Style, Content, and Reference

I completed a substantive copyedit for grammar, style, and clarity. I deleted or compressed a good bit of text that was much more promotional than encyclopedic in style and content. The essence remains, just reads considerably less like a self-promotion entry. Need to add references for the listed awards - vaguely presented at this point. Robertnola (talk) 15:36, 26 February 2019 (UTC)[reply]