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"Stewart was Sunderland's top scorer with 24 goals" - we haven't mentioned him yet, but there is also an Anthony Stewart mentioned later in the article. Perhaps say Ross for clarity?
"Lee Mason was the video assistant referee (VAR) as in May 2022, the EFL had announced that for the first time, the VAR system would be used at all play-off finals" - I would reverse the order of this sentence, I found it slightly hard to scan... first say that the system had been introduced, then say who did it.
"Wycombe Wanderers were initially given 19,205 tickets and applied for an extra allocation" - were they granted one? And to how much? Given that we mentioned the same info for Sunderland
"instead Roberts was called for offside" - according to the rules (IIRC) the offside would nullify the penalty claim anyway, wouldn't it? The previous sentence gives the impression that maybe Sunderland were hard done-by.
"The last chance of the half fell to Anthony Stewart but he headed Jacobsen's free kick wide of the Wycombe Wanderers goal" - I've just realised that Stewart and Jacobsen are Wycombe players (perhaps making the confusion mentioned above less obvious). But here you say they are shooting towards their own goal, which doesn't make much sense. Presumably "wide of the Sunderland goal". And also spell out that Anthony Stewart is a Wycombe player.
"Sunderland made their first personnel change" - I don't object to saying "personnel" once in the paragraph, but given that it's a slightly quirky term, maybe reword on the second occurrence.
Well, was trying to avoid generic "change" (because people have complained that could be applied to tactics) and trying to avoid endless repetition of substitute or substitution. But changed. If you prefer it that way! The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 13:36, 10 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]
"Wycombe Wanderer's Jordan Obita" - apostrophe should be after the s
Per above, does the "Stewart" mentioned as Sunderland's goalscorer need to be clarified as Ross? Perhaps not, given that Anthony plays for Wycombe, but putting it out there anyway.
"congratulations Sunderland" - start new sentence with a capital letter
