Talk:IPEX syndrome
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Wiki Education assignment: ENGW3307 Adv Writing for the Sciences
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 9 January 2023 and 17 April 2023. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Marieyellow11 (article contribs).
— Assignment last updated by Marieyellow11 (talk) 03:27, 27 March 2023 (UTC)
Revision Plan
Hi all! I'll be editing this article as a class assignment. Here's an overview of my plans:
General:
- Adjust language to be more accessible and match manual of style for medicine-related articles
- Fix minor grammar/syntax errors
- Update sources. Many are old and no longer entirely accurate, especially for diagnosis/treatment.
- Expand all sections, add new ones if needed.
Genetics: This is already well-developed, but I'll adjust the language to be more understandable for the general audience.
Family History: The information here belongs under a different heading. I'll move it and fill out this one with appropriate information.
Research: I'll refocus and elaborate on the history that this section touches on. Might change the heading accordingly. Marieyellow11 (talk) 05:08, 4 April 2023 (UTC)