Talk:Brown's syndrome

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Complete Edit/Re-write required?

This article seems quite poorly written in general. Poor wording and grammar is immediately evident and I suspect some of the facts will need verifying and referencing? I will try to re-write parts of it in the coming weeks, but if anybody has a special interest in this topic please feel free to collaborate. DW1979 (talk) 12:04, 1 February 2010 (UTC)[reply]

References

Seriously - where are they? There are a lot statistics given, and they need verifying and sourcing. This article is still a mess, although I have made some attempt at cleaning it up. If anyone else has the motivation to do more, that would be great! Tinkstar1985 21:25, 11 January 2011 (UTC)[reply]